Author: alistair

Comments on 4 shot scene by sky’s group

what we like:
– black and white
– admittance of defeat- face drop
– seat moving

what we don’t like
– seat rocking
– dance off

to improve:
– focussing when sky comes in
– wifi used as an excuse to not admit that he wants to be his friend
– face drop ending, “I don’t know him”